Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

:turbopoke:
 

Love and Chaos by ~Loke-Trenzeta:iconLoke-Trenzeta:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


Rain trickles down my window as it slowly makes its way down to the horizon.
Complete but missing
We learn threw all things that nothing is perfect
All things that appear perfect end in chaos,
So how can this be reality
Two lovers
Two souls
Two hearts
So different yet so perfectly matched ,
Threw fate it was that we met
And threw love that enables us to stay together,
As well as true to each other
This love so deep
This perfect chaos
This non-matching pair
So as the rain continues to fall I conclude that our love, although chaotic at times is perfect

Love & Chaos -by Loke “ZD” Trenzeta
©2005-2009 ~Loke-Trenzeta
:iconloke-trenzeta:

Author's Comments

I wrote this obviously when it was raining as it often does here in florida.its crap but its my first real deviation so yeah hopefully their will be better soon to come.I think I'm going to talk my sister in to taking me to barnes & nobels so I can buy a book on writing poetry since their are so many rules and obviously I know absolutly none of them.anyway I hope you enjoy,its treally quite simple but any way enjoy.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconloke-trenzeta:
~Loke-Trenzeta Jun 10, 2005, 3:50:34 AM
fucking garbade dude Iv'e seen kindergardners write better shit the this, your a loser and need to get the fuck out of your house and get laid.....fucking moron
:iconloke-trenzeta:
~Loke-Trenzeta Jun 10, 2005, 3:53:19 AM
well nobody asked you to read it dumbass,go find something beter to do with your time the make negative comments about other peoples hard work. so I would apriciate it if you left my hard work alone and go critisize some one else.
P.S. lick my balls
:iconloke-trenzeta:
~Loke-Trenzeta Jun 10, 2005, 3:56:29 AM
Haha if you had any you fucking pussy !!!hard work? what did this take you like 10 min of strenuous labor? OMGFG you must have broken a sweat fat ass bitch.and I will critisize who ever the hell I want and you and who ever the fuck you wrote this for are going to sit back and like it. I know she didn't find that piece of crap romantic she should ditch your ass and come to me.
P.S. Your a fucking loser!!!
:iconloke-trenzeta:
~Loke-Trenzeta Jun 10, 2005, 3:58:32 AM
ah go fuck your self your the loser here shit give up allready is it that fucking important? shit just watch me write another deviation and another and another...that should shut you the fuck up...yeah not so hot any more are ya?are ya!? Mr.Big Man trying to pick on other peoples efforts at love poems..well you know what you need to find your own girlfriend and get a fucking life, I think your the one that needs to go out and get laid my friend not me...
:iconloke-trenzeta:
~Loke-Trenzeta Jun 10, 2005, 3:59:03 AM
ever feel like your playing chess with yourself?
:iconfree-banana:
~free-banana Jun 29, 2005, 2:22:25 AM
oh. my. god.

I like it <3333

don't fight with yourself o_o

--
I almost crapped myself.../LIT/erally.
Previous PageNext Page

Details

June 10, 2005
804 bytes

Statistics

7
2 [who?]
40 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map

©2009 deviantART. All rights reserved
About Us | Contact Us | Site Tour | Help & FAQ Advertise | Services Etiquette | Privacy Policy | Terms of Service | Copyright Policy